Tuesday, May 10, 2005

I Don't Like You Any More!

Everyday we touch, and I feel your presence,
But the fondness is somehow absent.

You try to clear things up for me, and widen perspectives,
But I always see through you.

You spend the day with me, every moment of light,
But you never realise that my dreams are fine without you.

Yet you leave a mark on me,
That I try hard to remove.

Negatives seem to increase with time,
And I don't care too much for plusses too.

Looking forward to the day I get rid of you,
And move to contact lenses!

:-)

12 comments:

Kaarthik said...

not planning for an even closer relationship ? aka laser ?

janani said...

@kaarthik - my power is very wierd actually, i think the laser thing can't ne done! sob sob!

Sagnik Nandy said...

deep *and nice* ...

Sagnik Nandy said...

... and had to mention this as well - a friend of mine wroote this poem called "passionate kiss" which spoke abt his lips touching her hot lips and the refreshing experience - while alluding to a cup of tea :)

janani said...
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janani said...

@sagnik - thanks :-)

and nice imagery! very enjoyable - building up a vivid description with a lot of details and then let it down in a whoosh! :-)

Nithya said...

lovely this was

janani said...

@nithya - thank u! :-)

Karthik said...

good one...

janani said...

@karthik - thanks :-)

Subs said...

i Still feel .. u wanted to tell about someone else ..
and fooled us finally ..

neways...
i enjoyed it !

janani said...

@subs - nopes darling! :-) i seriously wanna lose these specs somehow! :-)