Everyday we touch, and I feel your presence,
But the fondness is somehow absent.
You try to clear things up for me, and widen perspectives,
But I always see through you.
You spend the day with me, every moment of light,
But you never realise that my dreams are fine without you.
Yet you leave a mark on me,
That I try hard to remove.
Negatives seem to increase with time,
And I don't care too much for plusses too.
Looking forward to the day I get rid of you,
And move to contact lenses!
:-)
11 comments:
@kaarthik - my power is very wierd actually, i think the laser thing can't ne done! sob sob!
deep *and nice* ...
... and had to mention this as well - a friend of mine wroote this poem called "passionate kiss" which spoke abt his lips touching her hot lips and the refreshing experience - while alluding to a cup of tea :)
@sagnik - thanks :-)
and nice imagery! very enjoyable - building up a vivid description with a lot of details and then let it down in a whoosh! :-)
lovely this was
@nithya - thank u! :-)
good one...
@karthik - thanks :-)
i Still feel .. u wanted to tell about someone else ..
and fooled us finally ..
neways...
i enjoyed it !
@subs - nopes darling! :-) i seriously wanna lose these specs somehow! :-)
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