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In case I didn't make this cle...Thans everyone. In case I didn't make this clear in my post, this is fiction. My mother is a wonderful woman, but she didn't work at a shelter.<br /><br />Melissa, please don't apologize. I sound so ungrateful, cribbing about your challenge when it got me to writing something outside my confort zone. You are right, it would have been better with some more dialogue.jananihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08516521723511389037noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12326794.post-87187725019776443672011-04-29T11:33:28.413-07:002011-04-29T11:33:28.413-07:00Nice job with the challenge! I submitted it w/o kn...Nice job with the challenge! I submitted it w/o knowing who would get it - if I knew you'd done something similar before, I wouldn't have chosen this, sorry! That being said, I like the elements you chose for the child to focus on (smell, look of the room, lollipop, etc). I think you could have expanded on the dialog between the mother and child - would be a great place to show how challenging it is for an adult to explain the world to someone so innocent. Good read, and I hope to read more from you :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12326794.post-82590361462497785532011-04-29T09:59:13.214-07:002011-04-29T09:59:13.214-07:00Love how you show the innocence of a child and the...Love how you show the innocence of a child and their view of the world.Kathttp://sassyirishlassie.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12326794.post-27760437433755705882011-04-29T00:24:51.067-07:002011-04-29T00:24:51.067-07:00This is stunning. You have an awesome mother. And ...This is stunning. You have an awesome mother. And she would be very proud of this piece, really hard warming.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12326794.post-43084448483713275332011-04-28T17:39:23.685-07:002011-04-28T17:39:23.685-07:00i love this, so very real. when my kids were very ...i love this, so very real. when my kids were very small, i worked in a domestic violence program. my kids thought it was fantastic, so child-friendly, and it was. really hard to talk about what mama did for work. just the concept of "work" by itself is difficult. you described it really well!Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12326794.post-89409291962163500932011-04-28T16:21:25.364-07:002011-04-28T16:21:25.364-07:00Thanks everyone. I am reading other people's c...Thanks everyone. I am reading other people's challenges today and boy they were toughies! I feel like a wimp for crying over this one.jananihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08516521723511389037noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12326794.post-44611661626700378342011-04-28T11:42:10.690-07:002011-04-28T11:42:10.690-07:00You did a very nice job rising to this challenge, ...You did a very nice job rising to this challenge, it is a tough one even for a parent. Seeing ourselves through our children's eyes is a sobering task, it forces us to get a good look at who we say we are and what we claim to do. I think your piece captured that sentiment beautifully.Khttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00543334704879531796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12326794.post-67945758167168935562011-04-28T06:57:03.433-07:002011-04-28T06:57:03.433-07:00You did a great job getting the perspective of the...You did a great job getting the perspective of the little girl. I'm glad you were able to go to this place, even if it was outside your comfort zone.supermarenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15777234136449317372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12326794.post-71127336378891583192011-04-28T01:00:00.407-07:002011-04-28T01:00:00.407-07:00That was a nice read, although I did feel like I w...That was a nice read, although I did feel like I was five and about to cry for no reason at one point, which means your words were extremely evocative.<br /><br />Excellent job m'dear!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00879343763392440400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12326794.post-13530190311863891962011-04-27T19:59:15.838-07:002011-04-27T19:59:15.838-07:00children are innocent and really don't see pas...children are innocent and really don't see past their immediate world, do they? I liked where you went with this.<br /><br />www.alotoflayers.blogspot.comThe Onionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17003018180927573923noreply@blogger.com